15.Week 15-Vacation plans (100) rewrite

   I have two plan in this summer vacation. One is I'm going to go to Okinawa with my friends as a trip. And I'm going to go to Okinawa with my other friend as a trip. So I will go to Okinawa two times in this Summer. It's amazing. I really looking forward to it. First trip is we are going to go Churaumi Aquarium and pain apple park and swimming in the sea. But second trip is very exciting. We will go to Kerama Islands. Japanese goverment decided Kerama Islands as a national park in this year. This place is very beautiful and there are a lot of precious creatures. And their clear water called “Kerama blue.” And we will try to diving. My friend is good at diving, and he has diving license, so I want to learn how to diving from he.

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14.Week 14-About blogging (100) rewrite

  I like blogging. And I think it is very important that blogging in English. And good point of blogging is we can share own daily with friends each other. And we can write comment, so we can share opinion too. So blogging is very fun and watch the friend blogging is very fun too, I think. I always enjoy blogging. And other good point of blogging is we can put pictures and some links or short movie with contents. And we can think blog design or color. So I think computer is great and useful. I think our world or horizon is expanding by use blob. Because, we can meet many things or opinions on blog.

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13.Week 13-Your own topic (90) rewrite

  I'm going to write about my English skill. I know my English skill is very bed and I have to study more. I don't like English grammar very much, so my English grammar skill is very bad. So I can't make sentence in English quickly. This is big problem. And my reading skill is very bad too. When I took TOEIC test, my listening score is better than reading score. And I love speaking. And  in addition, I love English pronunciation, it is fun. Because I like copy native speaker's pronounce. And I like western music. I am child, so I like young foreign singer like Justin Bieber. But my foreign friends don't like him. Anyway, I like singing song in English too. And I like copy rap lyrics. So I want to become speak English more  fluently.

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12.Week 12-Your own topic (90) rewrite

　　I'm going to write about good point of study English. My dream is become an English teacher. And I want to teach English at university like my teacher Mr.Tomei. But this dream is very difficult; I know I have to study hard if I want to my dreams come true. And I want to get a job using English. I want to meet a lot of foreign people. Because Japanese and Foreign people is very different. Foreign people have good point compare to Japanese. For example, Japanese is not good at say own opinion, but foreigner is good at say own opinion. So I respect them, and I always learn many things from my foreign friends. They are inspiring me. I always study English because I am majoring in English. But I can learn many things through study English, It is very good point, I think.

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11.Week 11-About my keitai (90) rewrite

   I use docomo's smart phone. And it is Android and Aquos phone made by sharp. And I have been using this phone when I was high school student grade 3. So this is very old model, and I have to buy new one. But I'm waiting for this year's new summer model. My phone's good points are waterproof and dustproof. So I love my phone. My phone and I are good friend. Because we always together. She wakes up me on time every morning, and we took a lot of picture until now. And I can connect my family and friends every time by use this phone. She is my part of me. We have same experience.

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10.Week 10-Using the computer (90) rewrite

    I don't like computer very much. Because I'm not good at using computer, and I’m not good at typing too. But I want to become good at using computer. So I have to practice typing. And I want to get new tablet. I think tablet is very useful. Computer skills are evolving every day. And we have to follows those skills. Because computer is very important goods in our life. We can't work on study or walking without computer. Everyone using computer. And computer is very useful we can get various information easily. 

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9.Week 9-My favorite movie(s) (80) rewrite

  My favorite movie is Harry Potter series. I have seen all series this movie. I saw this movie when I was seven years old. I like this movie from at that time. I think this movie is the best movie ever. Especially my favorite series is "Prisoner of Azkaban." Because in this movie appear Sirius Black and Remus Lupin. I love Remus Lupin. He is my dear and great werewolf. And he love chocolate. In this Summer Harry Potter's attraction is will open in USJ, Japan. I really want to go to there. We can go to wizarding world. I learned about love of family and friends. I think love is

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8.Week 8-Foreign countries (80) rewrite

  I like foreign countries but I have never been to foreign countries. So I really want to go to the foreign countries if I get to a chance. And I want to go to study oversea as an exchange student. I want to go to all around the world, and make a lot of foreign friends. I would like go to America and England. I have a friend who lives s in America, he lives in Montana states. Sometimes he sends me a lot of pictures of Montana states. There are beautiful nature. I like that place. I have not seen him for two years. He was my English conversation teacher. I know him when i was eleven.

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7.Week 7-My other classes (70) rewrite

   I have a lot of classes at university except English writing and speaking and reading. My favorite class is English literature class. We learn about English old literature at this class. Last week we studyed about William Shakespeare. We watched a movie titled "Othello" made by him.  And we werer write a report about his movie. It was very difficult, but I enjyoed it. This movie's story about love and jealousy. I watched this movie for the first time, so this movie is not happy end. But this movie makes me think about love a lot.

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6.Week 6-How I study English (70) rewrite

  I have been English conversation school every week since when I was eleven, so I always can study English from foreign people. I am happy that good learning English enviroment. I want to thanks to my parents that give me this good enviroment. But my English skill is very bad so I have to study more. I don't like English grammer, but I really like English pronunciation. So I always study pronunciation a lot. My pronunciation teacher is strict but he is very smart and he always give me a good effect I think. And of course I respect Mr.Tomei. He is my speaking class teacher. I like his class and I always enjoy his class.

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5.Week 5-Food/eating habits (60) rewrite

  To be frank, I think my body is not hearthy. Because I have sweet teeth, and my friend who is a doctor said, "You have to lose weight." I know I have to lose weight, but maybe I can't lose weight as long as exsits Starbucks in the world. My favorite Starbucks menu is Frapecheeno but my foreign friends always said, "Oh my god, your choise is looks like bad for health." I think I am a ATM of Starbucks. But I have to lose weight. Health is very important because we can't everything without good health.

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4.Week 4-Golden Week plans (60) rewrite

   Golden weeks coming soon. I have not any plans, and we have many homeworks. So I'm notlokking forward to it very much. But I can spend time with my parents. My parents are always busy so I have no time stay with they. So I feel happy. And I wanna go to my grand parents house, they are live far way from our house. I wanna meet they. And I wanna go to shopping and Karaoke with my friends. Umm...I have run out of material to write about.

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3.Week 3-My hobbies (50) rewrite

  I have many hobbies. One is playing the piano, I have been a piano lesson since when I was three years oild. And the other is play the Kyudo. Kyudo is Japanese archery. I have been Kyudo lesson since when I was junior high school student. And I like watching movie and Figure skating. My favorite movie is Harry Potter series, this movie is the best movie I have ever seen. And I am a big fan of Figure skating. I can't Figure skating but I can skating. Umm... oh, and I like go to cafe. My favorite cafe is Starbucks. I usually go to there about twice a week. Because I have a sweet teeth.

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2.Week 2-Music I like (50) rewrite

  I like listen to music, and My favorite is J-pop but I most like western music. My favorite singer is Justin Bibber, and Arianna Grande. But I can play the piano, so I like classical music too. My favorite musician is Chopin. I love his work, and I have been playing his work many times in my life. I think He has an excrement talent musician.

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1.Week 1-First classes and new school year (50) rewrite

  My name is Ayaka. I am a university student, and majoring in English. My hobbies are watching movie and listening to music. I like love story movies, however my most favorite movie' Harry potter. Also I often listen to Western music.

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My favorite things.

  My favorite things are watching the movie and figure skating. My favorite movie is Harry Potter series. This movie is the nest movie I have ever seen. And of course, I completed all story. My favorite character is professor Remus Lupin, and he is a werewolf. And my another favorite things is figure skating.　I can't figure skating but I can skate. My favorite Japanese skater is Yuzuru Hanyu and Mao Asada.

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My favorite places.

  My favorite place in Japan is Okinawa. I went to Okinawa for the first time when I went to school trip. I love Okinawa's beautiful sea and sky. But these days, one of Okinawa's island called "Kerama Island" is decided the Japan's national park by the government. So I really want to go there if possible if I get to a chance in this Summer vacation.

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My dream.

  My dream is I want to be a English teacher. I like studying English and I like use English. I have been studying English since when I was junior high school student, and I have been go to English conversation school except school. So English is gave me many things and a lot of foreigner friends. But I have never been to overseas, so I want to go studying overseas if I get to a chance.

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My hobbies.

  My hobby is playing the piano and play Kyudo. I have been take piano lesson since when I was three years old, and I have been taking Kyudo lesson since when I was junior high school student. I love this hobby, and this is part of my life. In the future I will continue this hobbies, and I want to get license teach skill if I get skills I would teach my child.

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Introduce myself.

  My name is Ayaka, and I am a 19 years old. I am a university student and majoring in English. I have a black long hair and brown eyes. And I have a sweet teeth and my hobby is go to Starbucks. And I like watching movie and reading a book. And I like hold the party with my friends.

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